- Three of them sitting there in complete silence.
I looked up from my homework, and saw
what I always saw, the vending machines. They sat across from me. The
sight of vending machines was not all that pleasing, though the sound
was even worse, with people screaming and playing loud music in the
lounge nearby.
***
I sat in the back corner of the
library. The quiet was much more pleasing to me for doing homework. I
did not feel bad for abandoning the vending machines.
***
I pulled my glove out of my bag and
went out to play pass. It did not look like a safe place to me for
playing baseball. It was a basketball gym with doors and things!
Everywhere I looked there seemed to be doors or windows of glass,
openly exposed to errant throws. Then I looked into the back corner.
"Hello, you again."
***
The vending machines in the corner
apparently were stored there for safety, which made no sense to me.
After a while I just took all the breakable things for granted. So
many people keeping drilling throws off of one of them made it a lot
easier to take it for granted. As I did the players calling me Tomas,
which led to a few calling me Tomahawk because they could not
pronounce it.
***
"Here," the player said,
"When he comes we'll go three way."
The other player came, and we threw
three way for a bit. Having been using soft baseballs for fielding,
the hard one for throwing stung my hand a little bit when I caught
it. We had thrown for five minutes or so when my throw sailed a
little bit on me. Unconcerned, we watched it skip, bounce off a
table, and then hit the vending machine. But it hit a different one,
with glass on the front. There was a quiet crack.
***
The three of us stood looking at it.
"Did it break?" one of them
asked me.
"It looks like it," I
replied.
The other player had already retrieved
the ball, and someone else who happened to have been walking by who
presumably worked at the gym had looked at it and gone off.
"Who threw that?" another
player asked.
"It wasn't me," I said to
him, with a smile. "No it was me," I corrected.
We went on throwing, though I had us
move away from the vending machines eventually, as throwing at them
was now making me uncomfortable. As we threw, every minute or so I
heard the tinkle of more broken glass falling off.
I took the opinion that if it was
broken, there certainly wasn't anything I could do about it.
***
I had assumed the coaches had noticed
it, but when the director of the program came to look at it, the
coach who was there was surprised by it. Up close, I could see what I
had thought was a small crack was actually a gaping hole, and the
hole door was shattered, like when a car hit another car head on and
the windshield got demolished. The director said that it was to be
expected with baseball in a gym, but that we should put a mat up over
the vending machines next time. I apologized, but he said that it was
fine. And the players got even more reason to call me Tomahawk.
***
Later in the practice I
threw the ball, and it ricocheted off the first baseman's glove,
almost behind the mat.
"Tomas, if you break
another freaking vending machine," the coach said in a joking
tone, "We're taking it out of your pocket. Or adding it to your
tuition."
***
The next practice, we went
to throw again.
"Coach, can we put the
mat up?" I asked.
"Oh yes, we should,"
he assented. "Are you nervous you might hit one again?"
"I'm going to be scared
of vending machines for the rest of my life," I replied.
What a superb last line! I wasn't expecting that. The whole concept, your way of dealing with the prompt is clever. I'm always happiest when the writer is not too literal or worried about the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThe first two vignettes, although about vending machines, are completely overwhelmed by the gym sequence, and that imbalance is serious--either the first two have to be fleshed out or they ought to be dropped. The second way would certainly work; the first way might open new vistas--or maybe fall flat!
I was attempting to get the connection between vending machines there, but didn't really have anything descriptive in the first two paragraphs. I think that it would probably be difficult to add a descriptive occurrence into the first two paragraphs, and to still fit it with the rest. I think dropping them might be cleaner.
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