We name the guilty man!
I was attending the awards ceremony at
the University of Maine at Orono, again. I had partaken in the math
competition, and obviously had placed as I had done the couple
previous years. My sister was there as well, and we were all shown
around the college, shown different programs and things going on.
There were all sorts of experiments and things. Then we got to a room
with robotics. The teacher had a Ph D., and showed us all of the
robots, like a robot that played chess, that was finicky and
generally did not work. Then he showed us the large towering robot in
the corner.
"Who wants to try it?" he
asked.
All of the other students were
apparently all from one high school, of the "I'll just hang at
the back with my head down and hope nobody notices me" variety.
Since no one else was willing, my sister and I volunteered, and went
up to the robot. Other graduate students who had worked on these
projects were looking on.
"It took us a long time to get
this one to work," the teacher informed us.
It was a large arm anchored in a larger
base, reaching up towards the ceiling.
"Here is the remote control. You
press this button to turn it left, this for right."
I looked up at the monstrosity I was
about to operate. I pressed the button to turn right for a moment,
then let go, and pressed the stop button. Sure enough, the machine
registered it, and turned exceedingly slowly to its left.
Unfortunately, it did not register that I had released the button and
pressed stop. The arm turned, and being in the corner of the wall, it
reached it and attempted to continue through the wall.
"Turn it off!" the teacher
shouted.
"It won't!" I exclaimed.
I thrust the controller into his hands, happily ridding myself of it, and he frantically pressed the stop button repeatedly, and nothing happened.
"Turn it off, turn it off, turn it
off!" Felicia screamed, jumping up and down.
The arm was pressing into the wall. We
could hear the parts straining, as it inevitably used its
incomparable strength against the brick wall.
The teacher, seeing that all efforts at the controls were futile, dove down to the floor, and unplugged the robot. It halted. There was pitch silence.
"I did not mean to do that,"
I commented.
The robot would be fine, nothing was
broken, and it was obviously a glitch on the controller, that the
button got stuck. One that apparently was in need of repair. I ended
up finding out that I was first place for my grade later in the day,
but I think the incident with the robot was the most memorable
experience of the day for me.
I once had a robot replace me as a heat-treater in a factory job: it was big, expensive, prone to breakdowns, and not nearly as good a heattreater as I was, but the bosses loved it because it didn't bitch about insufficient safety equipment the way I did. And who do you think those bosses came whining to when Big Robey went on a snooze cruise?
ReplyDeleteYou've got narrative working nicely here--action rising to a crisis, resolution delayed long enough for the reader's delight, eventual sigh of relief. Stronger piece: drop the last graf completely because explanation and completism are not your goals in story telling--fear, wonder, laughter, suspense are more the deal!
I don't think 'partaken' has the same connotation as 'taken part' though it literally means the same thing.